Monday, October 13, 2014

Artist Recognition - today is a good day!!!

I posted a poem on another site for poets and I got my first response.........I'm living la vida loca!!!!!!

Here's what the person posted:

This reaches deep into the soul, an amazing write12 Oct by Electric Peace | Reply

Here's the piece:


In My Solitude
By © kb 2005


Lady Day sings “in my solitude”
As I lay here in a mellow mood
Blazing smoke fills my head
As I lay here “in my empty bed”

Bending note to a soulful moan
Making me hate that I am all alone
Tree smoke wafting in the air
I start to cry, Hell! I don’t care

Lady Day repeats a moan
Damn this lonely, leave me alone!
In my solitude….ain’t no joke
Maybe I should quit this shit I smoke…
In my solitude ….I start to think

Fuck the smoke get a drink

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